I enjoyed your nice and clear elevator pitch! You have a calm and believable tone, building upon an image of someone knowing what she is talking about. Having a story as an intro was a good idea and truly capture the problem, however, I am a bit concerned about the length before getting to the solution. There may lie a risk of losing your listener.
Hey Nancy, I really thought you did a fantastic job of conveying your idea in this video. You were very easy to understand, and that goes a long way when pitching an idea. The product you are offering is also something that is very interesting, as I find that I end up either wasting food or not having enough variety when I go shopping. My only worry would be about the possible escalation of prices since the food would not be bought in bulk.
I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. It was clear, direct and had a good hook to grasp the listener. I think that your pitch was very applicable and allowed people to relate. Along with that, you have close to 15 more seconds to help explain your point further, so definitely use them if you find a way to tweek your pitch. Overall, great job.
Nancy,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your nice and clear elevator pitch! You have a calm and believable tone, building upon an image of someone knowing what she is talking about. Having a story as an intro was a good idea and truly capture the problem, however, I am a bit concerned about the length before getting to the solution. There may lie a risk of losing your listener.
Hey Nancy,
ReplyDeleteI really thought you did a fantastic job of conveying your idea in this video. You were very easy to understand, and that goes a long way when pitching an idea. The product you are offering is also something that is very interesting, as I find that I end up either wasting food or not having enough variety when I go shopping. My only worry would be about the possible escalation of prices since the food would not be bought in bulk.
Hi Nancy,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch. It was clear, direct and had a good hook to grasp the listener. I think that your pitch was very applicable and allowed people to relate. Along with that, you have close to 15 more seconds to help explain your point further, so definitely use them if you find a way to tweek your pitch. Overall, great job.