According to the assignment description, I think you were to supposed to separately make a pitch and the reflection on the feedback. Now the idea of a business idea pitch was kind of lost, as you focused so much on the reflection in the video. However, you did a good job clarifying your business idea and its details, particularly what differentiates you from other possible competitors, as well as reflecting on the feedback you got.
Going off what Maria said, I basically did the same thing as you. Rather than making a separate pitch, I just included all parts of the assignment in the video. I can see where she is coming from saying that it did "take away" from the business pitch, but i think you did a great job reviewing your feedback and presenting it in a formal manner. You did a great job of clarifying some things that were a little fuzzy in your first video but thats what trial and error is for. Overall great job.
Nancy,
ReplyDeleteAccording to the assignment description, I think you were to supposed to separately make a pitch and the reflection on the feedback. Now the idea of a business idea pitch was kind of lost, as you focused so much on the reflection in the video. However, you did a good job clarifying your business idea and its details, particularly what differentiates you from other possible competitors, as well as reflecting on the feedback you got.
Nancy,
ReplyDeleteGoing off what Maria said, I basically did the same thing as you. Rather than making a separate pitch, I just included all parts of the assignment in the video. I can see where she is coming from saying that it did "take away" from the business pitch, but i think you did a great job reviewing your feedback and presenting it in a formal manner. You did a great job of clarifying some things that were a little fuzzy in your first video but thats what trial and error is for. Overall great job.